Discussion:
Typo in asmctl(1)
Joe Smith
2021-04-20 03:17:58 UTC
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In
https://www.freebsd.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=asmctl&sektion=1&apropos=0&manpath=FreeBSD+12.2-RELEASE+and+Ports
it says

*video* *down*
LCD backlight less dark.

That should be either "LCD backlight less bright" or "LCD backlight darken".
Chris Hill
2021-04-20 16:12:29 UTC
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Post by Joe Smith
In
https://www.freebsd.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=asmctl&sektion=1&apropos=0&manpath=FreeBSD+12.2-RELEASE+and+Ports
it says
*video* *down*
LCD backlight less dark.
That should be either "LCD backlight less bright" or "LCD backlight darken".
Of those two phrases, the former reads better IMHO. And as long as we're
looking at this, I imagine "key down" needs the same change. And
REQUIERMENT should be REQUIREMENTS. And the line after, which begins
with "following," could benefit from an initial "the."
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Daniel Stevenson
2021-04-20 18:31:28 UTC
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Post by Chris Hill
Post by Joe Smith
In
https://www.freebsd.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=asmctl&sektion=1&apropos=0&manpath=FreeBSD+12.2-RELEASE+and+Ports
it says
*video* *down*
LCD backlight less dark.
That should be either "LCD backlight less bright" or "LCD backlight darken".
Of those two phrases, the former reads better IMHO. And as long as we're
looking at this, I imagine "key down" needs the same change. And
REQUIERMENT should be REQUIREMENTS. And the line after, which begins
with "following," could benefit from an initial "the."
I've submitted a pull request upstream with some suggested changes.

https://github.com/yuichiro-naito/asmctl/pull/13

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Daniel Stevenson

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